Cat-Noodles

Lately I've noticed a huge rise in child abuse and birth defects caused by parents stupidity and selfishness. It was after a family member ruined her new born sons life by doing marijuana while pregnant and then continuing to smoke the crap while breast feeding, he was born almost a month premature and soooo tiny, he barely makes a sound even now at three months old. It is my opinion that parents should have to sit an aptitude test and have a license to have children! Most criminals these days are created by their parents! Bad parenting creates bad people. By stopping some people from having children crime will plummet! No child will have

This is the first couple of Paragraphs of my novel! Please I would love feedback! I enjoy writing but haven't yet recived any feedback on my book so please be nice to me and give me your opinion! I am willing to take peoples opinions and suggestions into consideration during editing so Please comment! The wind howls loudly through the tree branches sending a chill up trills spine, he sits at the foot of an old hollow tree his knees pulled up to his chin. Goosebumps prickle over his bare, he stares at a long cut running from the knuckle on his index finger all the way to his elbow, blood still glistens freshly on the skin. In the distanc