This is the first couple of Paragraphs of my novel!
Please I would love feedback!
I enjoy writing but haven't yet recived any feedback on my book so please be nice to me and give me your opinion!
I am willing to take peoples opinions and suggestions into consideration during editing so Please comment!
The wind howls loudly through the tree branches sending a chill up trills spine, he sits at the foot of an old hollow tree his knees pulled up to his chin.
Goosebumps prickle over his bare, he stares at a long cut running from the knuckle on his index finger all the way to his elbow, blood still glistens freshly on the skin.
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